A woman is lovely
and
perfectly in harmony
only till she is married,
then once a child
she has carried
washed so many nappies,
made food for guests of hubby,
lost all charm has she
what a perfect woman was she?
even hubby doesn't
support her any more
what perfection
are you looking for?
now she is pregnant
once again
a perfect oven
is now her domain
in this woman
you still look around
for perfection
what a bother
she has herself
her own perfection doesn't gather
why the hell she married
I parry
and
in search of perfection still chase her
Tom, Dick and Harry
Oh sweet one
what made you marry?
still again asks
her lover Charry...
well your perfection
in poetry
of her description
is only still lovely...
Very Shakespearean....Part of this is oozing Sonnet 18. Well done!
Thanks Shakespearean you say wish you did it rate most call me bard
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Very strong poem on the subject, I liked it. Very well thought and executed.10+++
thank you for the three plus stars shall strive for five