Of What Perfection You Speak Poem by me poet yeps poet

Of What Perfection You Speak

Rating: 5.0


A woman is lovely
and
perfectly in harmony
only till she is married,
then once a child
she has carried
washed so many nappies,
made food for guests of hubby,
lost all charm has she

what a perfect woman was she?
even hubby doesn't
support her any more
what perfection
are you looking for?

now she is pregnant
once again
a perfect oven
is now her domain
in this woman
you still look around
for perfection

what a bother
she has herself
her own perfection doesn't gather

why the hell she married
I parry
and
in search of perfection still chase her
Tom, Dick and Harry

Oh sweet one
what made you marry?
still again asks
her lover Charry...

well your perfection
in poetry
of her description

is only still lovely...

Monday, December 7, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: love and art
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COMMENTS OF THE POEM
M Asim Nehal 21 December 2015

Very strong poem on the subject, I liked it. Very well thought and executed.10+++

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 22 December 2015

thank you for the three plus stars shall strive for five

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Mj Lemon 08 December 2015

Very Shakespearean....Part of this is oozing Sonnet 18. Well done!

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 08 December 2015

Thanks Shakespearean you say wish you did it rate most call me bard

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