Give Peace A Chance Poem by me poet yeps poet

Give Peace A Chance

Rating: 4.5


It is cold, very cold
freezing temperatures
a mild drizzle
yet unmindful
she stands silently
like a statue
under the isolated tree

all about her come and see
why such depth of silence
they wonder who is she
so very sweet and lovely
fine
a veritable divine

her eyes don't blink
statue stark
into the daylight distant
rare vision
no one knows
where she is looking

yet her mission
is just to draw
a large searching crowd
who will come and see
her blankly
looking into eternity
towards the distant horizon
wilderness
mind totally blissfully absent

all come and shed a tear
many say smile, O dear
she has a silent demeanor
yet she conveys
why this war and trouble

Give Peace a Chance
A tear does trickle

Then ups her umbrella
Mission complete
It now snows incessantly
She's conveyed her message

from Canada

Monday, February 25, 2019
Topic(s) of this poem: love and friendship,peace,peace day,peaceful,poetic expression,war and peace,love and art
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Notes
Give Peace a Chance
was composed over a year ago
It is most relevant
today
the World over

WITH LOVE FROM CANADA
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Valsa George 27 February 2019

In this war torn society, this message of peace is the most wanted thing! The lady who is silent powerfully conveys this message of peace shedding tears from her eyes! You have beautifully drawn a touching and vibrant portrait! Top marks!

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 29 April 2019

THANKS VG THE LADY REAL ONE NOW IS HISTORY Sorry for the delayed thanks today I am only brooming older poetry came by urs thanks

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Sachidananda Panda 19 December 2023

Yes! Its a clarion call to the deaf ears, the conceited arrogance and the foul play of politics make make all the difference in unsettling the fine balance between Peace and War. Thanks

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Kevin Patrick 07 February 2023

Each day grows more uncertain, global war and destruction seem closer on the horizon. More then ever Peace is what the word cries for. A great composition. I wish everyone read it.!

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me poet yeps poet 16 February 2023

Thanks Kevi 11220 have read it else where here I can't say many are reading thanks for PEACE WE ALWAYS PRAY SINCE AEONS BUT DO WE GET IT

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Rob Lamberton 18 January 2023

Yes! I'm glad I started reading your poetry. I see I'm not the only one!

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me poet yeps poet 01 February 2023

KIND THANKS............RL

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Anjandev Roy 10 January 2023

Magnificent piece......one of Ur best......thank u, dear poet....

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me poet yeps poet 01 February 2023

THANKS POET UR MY BEST POET OF PH ALSO

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me poet yeps poet 24 December 2022

now read by over 10,066....great readership ALL POETS INTERNATIONALLY

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