Oh my Dear daughter
I would always like
To see you
Looking at the sunshine
I would love to see you
Moving like a free cloud
And showering love
On parched ground
I would love to see you
Falling like a spring
Up on the hard rocks
And making way
For yourself
I would love to see you
As a candle dispelling darkness
I would love to see you
Gathering courage from every source
I would love to see you
Stand for the truth
And save every creature in distress
I would love to see you
Shine in your souI
With kindness.
I would love to see you as a candle dispelling darkness- and the flame may be flamed in your heart to flame in the heart of millions- good penning
Great motivating advising poem to yor daughter that all mommies would find inspiring and useful! Kudos fellow indian poetess.
An endearing poem dear poetess. Lovely expression... loved it
I would love to see you Stand for the truth And save every creature in distress I would love to see you Shine in your souI With kindness..........impressive expression with nice theme. Beautiful poem shared. Thanks.
What a beautiful poem, made up of a parent's wishes that her child's life is richly fulfilling, that the things which characterize it are things of moral value and not materialistic stuff. Which makes me read your poem as a prayer to some higher entity that listens to our expressions of love for others.. Your voice in this poem is so calm and focused, there's no nervous demands, just a quiet but deep joy in your daughter. This is the double effect of poetry: by expressing your feelings so vividly you evoke the same feelings in us.
I would love to see you as a candle dispelling darkness! Care for your daughter. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.
very nice poem. Being a mother of a daughter myself, I completely agree with you on this...
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
I would love to see you as a candle dispelling darkness- and the flame may be flamed in your heart to flame in the heart of millions- good penning Bharati Nayak
Thank you so much for your valuable comments and inspiring words.