it is said that 'feelings should be seen'.
that is every womans dream.
to prevent the hurt and ease the pain
because no two loves are ever the same.
what good would it be, if every feeling you could see.
you could never have a surprise 'of that there is no lie'.
' i'll take the good old fashion love'.
so in my way, i could show exactly what i feel
and that my love is real.
a poem written or taken from a book.
it gives your love a brand new look.
a bouquet of flowers to compliment the hour.
even a small rose that tickles the nose.
all these little things a true lover brings.
a thought of a memory past
that in her heart, you know did last.
a joke, a smile, a tender kiss
something that you know she will miss.
the caressing of her face, your fingers
running through her hair, just to show how much you care.
all these things i would do, just to show
how much i love you.
i want to walk down the street
holding hands and looking at you.
and that you could do, the same thing too.
if you was able to see everyones
thoughts and dislikes, you would always be in a fight.
i prefer to be the old fashion lover
throughout our history, there has been no other.
as a woman, you want to feel his sensations
his fixations and his desires.
so that you could put out that fire.
love is not like a t.v. dinner that you
pop into the oven for it to get hot.
love is like boiling water in a pot
and you as the cook, know when to stop.
Good points. There is an old way of romance that is lost today. Youth know not of courting as it used to be. In the olden days, I think the way a man dated a women was alot different than it is now. I think it was done right and romantic back then. Maybe that's why our grandparents stayed married all of their lives? :) Romance, true love, little things....Makes a BIG difference. Your poem says soooo much. Deborah Cromer
it is said that 'feelings should be seen'. that is every womans dream. to prevent the hurt and ease the pain because no two loves are ever the same.....love is not only to be seenbut felt and expressed as well..... this was oldentype of love where it matered most..only eyes did the job...beautifully done sir.....10 read mine same coil... yes yes yes.....comehome
This again is very good sir.. Any one will feel the warmth of your love if they read this one.. Filled with emotions.. I liked the two poems I read of you today! ! Very good.. Nice to read... you have expressed you self well indeed... many tens with love shan
old fashioned lover had the passion with an emotional love..and you have brought out him or her beautifully....10
Such love is timeless. It is always in style. Bless you for this romantic view of life. You have my applause.10/10. Warm regards, Sandra
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
awwww thats so sweet. thank you for the dedication. i absolutely LOVE it. ill have jason read it ASAP and ill let you know what he thinks.: D 10++++++++++