On Other Things Poem by Dónall Dempsey

On Other Things

Rating: 5.0


You at the top of
a very tall ladder

painting a pelmet

in an exceedingly tiny tartan
red mini skirt

me at the bottom
painting the skirting board

my brush stroke
a little off

(not as good as it should)

my mind...

...on other things

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Gina Pisapia 25 January 2008

Very funny and wittyand sensual and sexual and loving and lustful and loving and loveing and...and...so on. Also highly enjoyable and well crafted poem. love GinaXXX

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David Taylor 24 January 2008

composing yet another poem I guess?

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Dónall Dempsey

Dónall Dempsey

Curragh Camp, Co. Kildare, Eire.
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