On First Looking Into Beloved's Excercising Room Poem by Dónall Dempsey

On First Looking Into Beloved's Excercising Room

Rating: 4.8


Bare breasted
as any Minoan Princess

weights grasped
like electricfying snakes

easily in each
hand.

She stands
as if a brilliant ancient mosaic

had come suddenly
alive

only that minute
& in that moment

almost expecting her
to grab the bull by the horns

& leap
over its charging back

as was the wont of a many a Minoan
way back then!

I feel like a proper
Cretan cretin

stumbling across
(by miraculous accident)

this treasure
his Princess

fascinated by the tiny
trickle of sweat

winding amazingly
between her breasts

catching both
our breaths

(gazing with a wild surmise)

as it heads for
the mystery of her

...holy delta.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Janice Windle 12 January 2009

I hardly recognise this goddess figure as me, Dónall, but thank you for the lovely compliments! This will encourage me not to get lazy and to keep up my efforts to keep fit!

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Original Unknown Girl 12 January 2009

Ooh la la Donall! When did you write this? Under the light of a full moon perchance? ? ? HG: -) xx

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Dónall Dempsey

Dónall Dempsey

Curragh Camp, Co. Kildare, Eire.
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