On The Edges Of The Green Poem by Dr subhendu kar

On The Edges Of The Green

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If truth be rhymed by the trust
on the edges of the green
you taught me the mathematics by abacus
I listen to your tunes by the innocence

Light when penetrates into the darkness
As the world blooming in brilliance
And you lead me the way by your grace
As the green meadow flecks by the sun

Across the time of commitments
when owned by the intimacy
I simply followed you like a shadow
Even onto the last dregs of the night

Yet with all letters of resilience
I blink to the edges of the night abiding
yet frightened by the afflicted ember
faith seems to fledges when intoned

As your words whisper me of the rising sun
Even if grimaced by the winter chilled
Still light blazes the earth by the art of creation
When you stand by me by guiding agility

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Thad Wilk 02 March 2008

A dreamy write Dr. Kar! ! Well executed, a pleasure to read thank you! ! *10* Best regards , Friend Thad

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Broken Peaces 02 March 2008

A soft eloquents pours from your work Dr. your work flows from a high plain of thought thankyou for sharing Chris 10

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Dr subhendu kar

Dr subhendu kar

Bhubaneswar, Odissa, India
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