! ! ! Wild Stream By The Eternity! ! ! Poem by Dr subhendu kar

! ! ! Wild Stream By The Eternity! ! !

Rating: 4.6


Rune of passion when holds the mystery
sympathy never dries empty by the reeks
eloquence of love parades across the bliss
the reason never seems to falter by the belief

trust still reels through the hidden dream
gleaming the pearl of blue emblazoned
walks follows the path true by repentance
enlightened by warmth as leaf rejoices in green

silence yet blazes the mystery of love in hide
moon still whispers the heart by the grin deep
hope mingles into the blue when emancipated
world wordless smiles faster by the redemption

yet the hours of the dark and light as all we need
clouds smacks of rain as the path of deliverance
love yet never follows foot prints of narrow endings
desire meanders into the wild streams by the eternity

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Jay P. Narain 22 September 2008

Dr. Kar, I love your poems. I am glad to see that we have great poets like you from India.

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Anand Dixit 23 September 2008

I loved it. I have given a 10.

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Lonnie Hicks 23 September 2008

Humm This is avery different kind of poetry and at first seem unfamiliar to me. But imagistically I loved the color and the capacity to make the reader pay attention to every word. It is poetry, in my view which makes the reader look behind the curtain to discover the gems there. Great work.

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that was an awsome poem you deserve a 10....

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Albina Barkhudaryan 28 September 2008

Your words are a work of art...I would love to hear your opinion about my style of poetry...

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Bharati Nayak 25 November 2015

Love that Wild Stream By The Eternity- - - Love is eternal____Love never follows foot prints of narrow endings.It is unselfish- -It fills the heart with unending hope and bliss.Thanks for sharing the wonderful piece of poem.

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Clarence Prince 17 July 2015

Silence mystery, love, redemption, emancipated, deliverance, and eternity! Those are all glorious words of hope, into this poem, along with others! Well done, Dr Subhendu!

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Michelle Kafka 15 August 2009

A deep moving poem with excellent word choices. Thanks for sharing.

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Dr Hitesh Sheth 14 November 2008

Wild sream of eternity, consisting of joy and serenity, Full of alluring charm, carries the world in it's arm. Hit

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Cecil Hickman 26 October 2008

beautifully written with depth of feelings and emotions very well penned, , graet write in poetry, , , blessings...Cecil

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Dr subhendu kar

Dr subhendu kar

Bhubaneswar, Odissa, India
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