On The Sands Of Love Poem by Dr subhendu kar

On The Sands Of Love

Rating: 4.9


As we search upon the milieu
of sands of love bristling
like moon in its brimmed blue
when much we sink into sorrow defiant.

as we ride uphill in askance
like wave rising over the sea
razzle upon the blueness steeped
rolling on to the beach ruined.

As we rave up possessing love
conquer the dream when unfolded
overcoming the pity and penitence
much as in searching upon the love overwhelmed

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Miriam Maia Padua 09 January 2009

'On the Sands of Love....' countless....lasting.... the richness of sands..the richness of love... ....the richness of your words.....deep, deep words........... 10+++++++++

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Alison Cassidy 06 September 2007

Your words flow over the sands of the love you portray with such eloquence. Beautiful poem. love, Allie xxxx

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Sandra Fowler 06 September 2007

Eloquently penned. Praise for your rich vocabulary. Take care. Warm regards, Sandra

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Dr subhendu kar

Dr subhendu kar

Bhubaneswar, Odissa, India
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