On This Day Poem by Jesus Diaz Llorico

On This Day

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'The trees and leaves are silent
as birds nestled in their branches
a few clouds that hovers overhead
with only skies and its seeing sun
and on this day...
I pictured you in my secret garden walls
walking alone near a waterfall
your face so like a flower
unaware of scent and sweetly bower
with no dusts and winds to bother
just a few sprinkles of water
but as I maneuver around the bend
I accidentally snapped a twig
that brought me back to reality
from my garden walls of fantasy
and with many things left undone
I'm back to the skies and its seeing sun.'

Friday, October 28, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: love and dreams
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Jesus Diaz Llorico 29 October 2016

Thank you for a well refined comment Ms Bharati Nayak

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Bharati Nayak 28 October 2016

A lovely expression of your reflective mind, thanks for sharing.To quote a few lines- - - 'but as I maneuver around the bend I accidentally snapped a twig that brought me back to reality from my garden walls of fantasy and with many things left undone I'm back to the skies and its seeing sun.'

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