Once Upon A Time Poem by Lodelyn Prado

Once Upon A Time

Rating: 4.3


Once upon a time, a girl was looking at the sky
With the rainfall streaming down her face
standing alone in the road
without anyone in the view.
Reminiscing all the sweet dreams
Which was replaced by a nightmare
A shattered glass can never be fixed
Once upon a time, this girl is alone.

Wednesday, December 9, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: betrayal
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
We were asked by our English teacher to post the poems we created during her time so this is it. Hope you like it :)
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Chinedu Dike 24 December 2015

An insightful depiction of nostalgic experience recalled as one faced the deplorable conditions at lowest ebb of life. A well articulated piece of poetry, nicely encapsulated and insightfully penned with conviction. Thanks for sharing Lodelyn. Please read my poem MANDELA - THE IMMORTAL ICON.

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Lodelyn Prado 12 January 2016

Thanks for the compliment Chinedu Dike: D

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Dr Antony Theodore 14 December 2015

Reminiscing all the sweet dreams...then the shattered glass........ take life positively. life is much more....... go on and you are going to find your way of success. thank you. tony

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Lodelyn Prado 14 December 2015

Sir tony, thank you for the comment, I really appreciate it :) I will take your advice to take life positively: D

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