mona martinez


One Day I Wish To Wake Up... - Poem by mona martinez

one day i wish to wake up,
and everything to be alright,
to have the guy of my dreams,
laying beside me,
helping me with what ever comes my way,
one day i wish to wake up,
and to enjoy the life i was given,
by doing what i love,
without it being a problem,
so i can remember my purpose in life,
one day i wish to wake up,
and to have this pain taken away,
to be able to walk,
more than now,
would be all i ever dreamed,
one day i wish to wake up,
and know who i am,
be the strong person,
i forgot to be,
because i'm tired of being who i am,
one day i wish to wake up,
and become everything i wanted,
the person who knows what she wants,
and not willing to take no for an answer,
because on day, that who i will be.
Copyright © 2009
7-26-09


Comments about One Day I Wish To Wake Up... by mona martinez

  • Rookie James Mcmahon (7/27/2009 3:55:00 PM)

    Hi, mona I do feel this, seemed questioning and a bit resigned It needs some fight back? go get your man lol, as a Scot we tend to use humour in difficult situations it helps me keep control of the situation, I agree with 'poetry is a good way to express emotions'though I feel it is important to keep the poem as poetry and one would think if it was about a depressing subject it would be wise to keep those poems aside until the really clever one comes out, but hey am no expert, ill read some more now as I have only read this one x (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie Shashendra Amalshan (7/26/2009 11:19:00 PM)

    one day i wish to wake up,
    and everything to be alright,
    to have the 'GIRL' of my dreams,
    laying beside me,

    Every ones dream indeed Mona....

    your poem remids me of a song again...

    WelCome To My Life- Simple Plan

    'Do you ever feel like breaking down?
    Do you ever feel out of place?
    Like somehow you just don't belong
    And no one understands you
    Do you ever wanna runaway?
    Do you lock yourself in your room?
    With the radio on turned up so loud
    That no one hears you screaming

    No you don't know what it's like
    When nothing feels all right
    You don't know what it's like
    To be like me

    To be hurt
    To feel lost
    To be left out in the dark
    To be kicked when you're down
    To feel like you've been pushed around
    To be on the edge of breaking down
    And no one's there to save you
    No you don't know what it's like
    Welcome to my life

    Do you wanna be somebody else?
    Are you sick of feeling so left out?
    Are you desperate to find something more?
    Before your life is over
    Are you stuck inside a world you hate?
    Are you sick of everyone around?
    With their big fake smiles and stupid lies
    While deep inside you're bleeding

    No you don't know what it's like
    When nothing feels all right
    You don't know what it's like
    To be like me

    To be hurt
    To feel lost
    To be left out in the dark
    To be kicked when you're down
    To feel like you've been pushed around
    To be on the edge of breaking down
    And no one's there to save you
    No you don't know what it's like
    Welcome to my life

    Just a part of a song Mona... This is how I feel..... May be you are feeling the same way too.... For many people who i love so much... for the kind of person i am today.. is not good enough.....
    so it hurts... and always feel like braking away.... ahh! ! ! ! ! some time feel like breaking away from PH too.. But keep penning your emotions in to poems....
    it always helps......
    see you soon...

    and this poem is presented well indeed.. i see a great development in your writing too...
    development in the sense, now the reader gets moved with the flow of your lines...
    10 for you

    with loves
    shan (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Sunday, July 26, 2009

Poem Edited: Thursday, October 22, 2009


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