Only One Poem by dani fries

Only One



it was the only choice she had
to get out of her home
the vilonce, the abuse its all finally gone
but little did she know
a war she joined, which was no better
basic threw, ait done
here it comes
time to see what she is really made of
guns firing, hitting and yelling
worst of all killing
she makes it though, home bound down
never been more greatfullto step foot in her home
but never regreats anything
cause she is finally strong!

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Payal Parande 24 July 2013

its different and well pinned, tell exactly what you want to, keep a reader interested till the end... a strong piece well done

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Gajanan Mishra 24 July 2013

finally strong, good write, thanks. I invite you to read my poems and comment.

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