Like a flash of lightening
Brandishing the sky
His richness in splendour-enchanting
More than money could buy!
Reach out to Him! He's within your grasp
Can't you feel His presence?
Languish not for time to elapse
Before you embrace His imminence!
I come and go
I come but once
Seize me! Oh seize my soul
Before my foe puts you in a trance!
I come like one in guise
That's what I am: a flash in a pan!
My craters of regret are deep in demise
Caress me! Oh my beloved!
Feast on me as much as you can!
a substantial poem..well written and the intense of the verses are eye catching..10
u have deepened your the theme of this poem thru ur words and imagination.. amazing poem
This had better be a religious piece. If it isn't I'm in trouble. Unlike the first poem, the title here does not help at all. It is much to vague for the contents. This might well be an example of a bad title. But be that as it may. It was a very nicely written piece. If this was a religious writing, it was well done, if not, then it wasn't. GW62
WOW! ! ! ............Your poem is great............I loved it a loooooooooot...SUPER...10++
An interesting poem with a lot of depth...Good write Johannes
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Quite a strong poem, with advanced vocaburaly! ! Well Done, I felt a lot of drama and power, reading that! 10! !