Terence G. Craddock (afterglows echoes of starlight)


Orpheus Ritual Cave Tour Guide


welcome to my office
how do you like my office?
my cave is my office?
visit as often as you need?

every day performing guide...
duties an Orpheus ritual slide...
into adventure underworld...
book if you please no priour notice?

aircon a steady 8 to 11 degrees
celsius year round to please
scenic underworld tours amaze

'modern people have funny
ways of earning money'
salary is summer job honey


Copyright © Terence George Craddock

Submitted: Friday, January 24, 2014
Edited: Friday, January 24, 2014

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Written January 2014 23&24/1/2014.

Titled, octave arrangement, written out 23rd January 2014, sestet arrangement written out 24th January 2014. 'Orpheus ritual' comment and two quoted lines by the novelist and poet Miroslavia Odalovic. The poem references one of our almost daily conversations from the 16th and 17th of January 2014.

Comments about this poem (Orpheus Ritual Cave Tour Guide by Terence G. Craddock (afterglows echoes of starlight) )

  • Rookie - 43 Points Miroslava Odalovic (1/26/2014 3:07:00 AM)

    I often write responsive lines, has always been a fruitful interaction, really glad you're back. (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 2,704 Points Terry Craddock (1/25/2014 9:08:00 PM)

    :) usually octave and sestet if writing in this form written rapidly on the same day; your used to me doing that, have written many poems on line while talking to you, or later from conversations with you :) (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 43 Points Miroslava Odalovic (1/24/2014 3:52:00 PM)

    I remember the exchange. :) So, you think octave one day and sestet the other. That's interesting. :) (Report) Reply

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