Our Broken Hearts (Secret Message Poem) Poem by Ronald Chapman

Our Broken Hearts (Secret Message Poem)

Rating: 4.5


Take hold of my hand.
Me and you need to take a stand.
Away with all those mad people.
From our past.
The broken hearts they gave us. Can not last.
Real love is coming into both our lives very fast.
World of friendship and love is now flying into our hearts to last.


Is this what true love means?
This love protects our hearts and our lives from jealousy.
How beautiful a feeling this is, to trust someone with my heart.
We used trust in our souls to,
Fix our broken hearts
Love.


The secret revealed:
'Take me away from the real world. Is this how we fix love? '

Tuesday, August 5, 2014
Topic(s) of this poem: love hurts
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
The secret is revealed by reading the word at the beginning of each line of the poem vertically. This then forms a sentence, when read down with an additional message.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM

Beautiful and optimistic work. Just what I needed to read to sooth my. Hurt soul and broken heart. Thanks for sharing

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