Our Lady Of Mount Carmel Poem by Michael Walker

Our Lady Of Mount Carmel

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Press me against your warm, carmel face.
Look at me with your warm, carmel eyes.
Your carmel cloaks my arms in your embrace.
You give your carmel milk to one who cries.

So often from your graces have I strayed.
In the lonely places have I stayed,
Though in your womb the Lord Himself has made.
I wade away, yet still to me you bade.

Make a tabernacle of my heart!
A crib where you can cradle Infant Christ,
Whose sweetness does exceed that of all art,
Whose beauty the world never has enticed,

And if I drank its dregs of bitterness,
It was because I longed for your caress.

Thursday, July 17, 2014
Topic(s) of this poem: heaven
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
As one can readily detect, the poem was prompted by my devotion to Our Holy Mother Mary, on her Feast of Our Lady of Mount Carmel, July 16,2014. I wear her Brown Scapular.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Michael Walker 20 February 2018

Possibly you repeat ' carmel' too much, but still a sincere, moving invocation to the Blessed Virgin of Mt. Carmel. A most precise rhyme scheme, and some fine metaphors.

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