Our Love Poem by abiola olubunmi

Our Love

Rating: 4.0


So far So much
I think of him
So much is at stake
I could not just leave
It was just too important

I thought of him once again
He would not leave me no more
He had done so many wrongs
But I could not just leave
He now knows his wrong
He was going to do more for our love

Our love was like a flower
Whose blossom like a well nurtured daffodils
It shined like the daffodils watered by our sweetness
Our touches enhanced the growth of the daffodils
The flower is now in need of strengths

We would make it survive
And shine brightly once again
We would come together once again
To take control of our love once again
We would make it flourish like the beautiful yellow daffodils
It is now going to grow to be more powerful and unbreakable

Friday, July 3, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: love and pain
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
inspired by A POEM WROTE ON DAFFODILS
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Nel Omofolarin 20 July 2015

This is a sweet note on love.I wish this love survives against all odds.

0 0 Reply
Chinedu Dike 05 July 2015

Beautiful love poem, well articulated and insightfully penned from heart with conviction. Lovely is a spiritual experience that affects us profoundly. However, love is whimsical and temperamental, coming unannounced and may leave without warning if not carefully nurtured by both couples. A lovely poem indeed. Thanks for sharing. Please read my poem MANDELA - THE IMMORTAL ICON.

1 0 Reply
READ THIS POEM IN OTHER LANGUAGES
Close
Error Success