Our Oasis... Poem by hazem al jaber

Our Oasis...

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Our oasis...



a dreamy oasis...
opened its arms for a lovers...
not any lovers...
lovers whom are drunks into their loves...
only for us...
only me and you...

my lips have kisses sweeter than the grape...
the wine is poured from my cup of plenty...

poured and dripping upon your thirsty lips...


beloved of mine...

longing thirsty lover...

plant your mouth and savour...

the fruit upon your tongue...

and suck the blossom of the flower...

my lips are longing for satisfaction...

longing to give and to take more from yours...


rose beds lie waiting for love's completion...

perfumed from the silky petals...

crushed into submission by our drunkenness...

we can no longer wait...

we are drunk on each other...
the stars and moon shine especially for us...

no other lover sees them like we do...

through our drunkeness...

though our wine of ecstasy...

we sip the nectar of completion...

and the world is ours...

come sweetie...
come my beloved, fill your cup with...

with my sweet wine,

my petals sweet open to you...

for your delight...
I kill you now with ardent kisses...

as we drink from the same cup...

I am weak with the wine of love...

come and be drunk with me...

lets be both drunks into each others...

here at this oasis...

our oasis` love...

where we can be forever...

drunks into this wine...

wine that comes out from our hearts...

to supply our thirsty lips...

and to take away our minds...

to lose oursleves...

with no waken up...




the world is fading and all I ever see...

is you...

only you...

all I ever feel in my heart...

is your love...

only yours...

all I ever need is your...

your sweet drunken love...

as we seek to fill our bodies with our wine...





Love you sweetheart!



by: hazem02@yahoo.com

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Naidz Ladia 03 May 2009

this poem is very well planned, well designed as to what words the author explains..a nice idea bout his expressions..written in lovable way, showing originality, ..for me, this is very nice dear..humble arrangement of words written in a very smart honesty....a unique form of expression..i may not use the good terms but 'smart honesty' is the best description for this piece of yours...hope this poem shows fine feelings, and i am so glad you found love not in reasonable doubts..goodluck to everything..and take it easy hon, it will be fine soo...ALLAH always guide and always protect and most of all, He provides..love this piece of yours, always remember''...love is never be taken for granted'..it is felt and everything follows..lavs ya dear...goodluck...naizz

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a very heart felt passionated poem..very well expressed Hazem..10............

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Maria Barbara Korynt 02 May 2009

The 'oasis of love' should appeal mainly with it, whom like and craving for this emotion. Love is a beauties 'matter' and is happening to not everyone. It sometimes appears to us, that it, not is what we waited for. The prosaic aspects of life sometimes are shattering our illusions and he is manifesting the brutal truth, that we are wrong. After all in spite of disappointments and experiences associated with it, the man is searching for love, partner, fulfilment and it for 'that' fate a long time ago' assigned ', he doesn't only still know what. :) I am greeting and for you - happiness and much true love :) Maria Barbara Korynt

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Ency Bearis 02 May 2009

wonderful verses...lovely as such....10

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Eyan Desir 02 May 2009

Very sweet great job dear poet...

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