Our Picnic Poem by Landrey

Our Picnic

Rating: 4.0


the forrest thick
the lanterns bright
our glowing eyes
and hands clasped tight.

the blanket spread
the moon our kite
our hearts are one
and tiffs made right.

the mountain breeze
the darkened night
our peaceful spot
and hopes aflight.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sophia White 31 December 2006

Hey, hey! I be liking this one! The simplicity is the genius of it.

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