Oxygen Poem by M.J. Lemon

Oxygen

Rating: 5.0


add hydrogen
in abundance
and watch
as Noah's boat
floats

Friday, June 17, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: grook,humour,insight
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Aniruddha Pathak 06 June 2019

What fuels good humour? Wit, wisdom, and brevity, And when hydrogen is added, ah levity, But you no one can blame If comes there to party burning flame!

1 0 Reply
Mj Lemon 07 June 2019

Thank you so much Aniruddha. And your observations...poetry, sheer poetry....Thank you again.

0 0
Kumarmani Mahakul 06 June 2019

Very short but interesting. Beautifully penned with nice diction. Thanks for sharing.

1 0 Reply
Mj Lemon 07 June 2019

So very, very much appreciated Kumarmani. Thank you.

0 0
Akhtar Jawad 17 April 2018

A humor with an insight is something more than humor, and so is this lovely poem.

1 0 Reply
Mj Lemon 11 May 2018

Akhtar, much appreciated. Thanks.

0 0
Muhammad Ali 08 November 2017

fun.. whenever we have some space, command and time, there is fun, fun for the laughing ones. He says.. this all is wisdom that He shares or grants with someone on His own will. poem is beautiful Mark

2 0 Reply
Mj Lemon 08 November 2017

Thank you so much, Muhammad. O yes...that balance between fun and wisdom...the essence of life.

0 0
Simone Inez Harriman 13 June 2017

Hydrogen being a clean fuel kinda fits with the powering of Noah's ark and a new greener beginning10....

1 0 Reply
Mj Lemon 14 June 2017

Great observation, Simone. How is it that every or any Green Party has missed that insight with respect to that ark? . Thanks so much.

0 0
READ THIS POEM IN OTHER LANGUAGES
Close
Error Success