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cody lalonde

(11/11/1987 / louisiana)

pain


It has many forms, some hurt worse than others
Some cause you to bleed, while others make you cry
Some make you want to die, or be dead, while
others just make you want to stay in bed
Pain, its like a bee stinging you in the face
Pain, its like someone spraying you with mace
Pain, its like having your best friend die
Pain, its like biting into a hot piece of pie
Pain, its like a knife tearing your skin
Pain, its like not having any friends
Pain, its like having your heart ripped in two
Pain, its like not knowing what to do
Pain, is a common thing for me
Pain, it fills my life with sorrow and misery
Pain, it makes me want to cry everyday
Pain, it makes me feel the worst way
Pain, it drives my life and the things I do
Pain, is what I get for loving you…..

Submitted: Thursday, May 15, 2008

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  • Palas Kumar Ray (6/6/2008 1:49:00 PM)

    Dear Cody, Pain is also to digest and also to be shared with friends.
    wish you deliver a better composition on 'pain' from your pen, (Report) Reply

  • (: God's Wild Child :) (5/31/2008 8:59:00 PM)

    I hate pain, so I'm here for u when ever u want to talk, just mesage me anytime. Thanx for sharing. I'll be praing for you Cody. (Report) Reply

  • Louise ~Janice~ Smith (5/26/2008 9:49:00 AM)

    i really like this one life is full of pain u just have to find away to get thru it and maybe life will turn out better than u expected! ! ! ! ! (Report) Reply

  • Chanja Cassini De Thury (5/20/2008 9:06:00 PM)

    This is fantastically written, I am also a poet who writes much about love.
    the ending was very unexpected and completely worth it, it just wrapped it up perfectly
    :) (Report) Reply

  • Bonnie Collins (5/19/2008 7:37:00 PM)

    Very emotionally penned with a broken heart.. All hearts must break cody for a reason, I trully believe that........ Stay well

    Bonnie (Report) Reply

  • Rani Turton (5/15/2008 5:43:00 PM)

    Well, this is a real sad poem which speaks out it's heart. But touching and authentic. Hope the pain will go away one day, Cody. (Report) Reply

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