Pain Poem by sergio bruno

Pain

Rating: 4.5


when the sun rises and night withdraws
Cold and in awful pain she lies
with her beautiful, invisible wings
not noticing that the bird
of nothingness
is there
she seemingly sits
with her eyes closed
but no
she is only a part of light now,
of light and love.........

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Agnes Parker 02 October 2009

liked your imagination.giving the word flights a new meaning

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Abigail Roscoe 30 September 2009

Intelligently written well done

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Keith Chapman 23 September 2009

well written poem...............9

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Marieta Maglas 02 September 2009

nice poem, thank you for sharing................10

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Peter Percy 22 August 2009

very touching poem...........

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