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You’re causing me pain
You’re in my head all the time
It’s causing me strain
When can I call you mine?

Can’t get your picture out of my mind
Especially your behind

I loved the way you looked at me
I loved the way you held my hand so tight
I was convinced it was love at first sight
Why did you runaway on me?
How could I’ve even let you go?

Melissa Barber

Saturday, June 4, 2005

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Frank James Ryan Jr...fjr 17 September 2006

CONSTRUCTIVE CRITICISM....THIS PIECE IS GOOD..IT WOULD BE VERY FINE IF YOU FOUND A REPLACEMENT LINE FOR''especially your behind'...Make no mistake...i'm no prude...the line just does not belong with the decorum of this serious-themed Poem...Otherwise, i love it...Bpttom line...It's your Poem...Your Call''''''''''''''''''''''''''''FJR

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