Pain Poem by Amanda Forrest

Pain

Rating: 5.0


You lay there in silence
A night so extreme
A relationship full of violence
You wish was just a dream

You say it will stop
That the love is so real
But the fall, the drop
Changes how you feel

You can feel your heart break
Your eyes fill with tears
The pain you can't take
The end is so near

The first tear falls
As you hear him come in
You wait for him to call
He knows your scared of him

You feel like a child
Living a nightmare
Your heart was once wild
But now you live in fear.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Romeo Della Valle 19 September 2011

Speechless! This is a superb, excellently written! A sad on with a touch of hop embedded in it! This beautiful and impressive write shows clearly your poetic talent and which has become your stepping stone to go through the door of the Poetry World! Soon, I will read other thought provoking poems with a different tone! I am very sure of that! I only can rate your poem 10+++ because that is the max allowed! Keep inspiring the World with more of your poignant writes! God Bless You Amanda! Love and Peace for always! Romeo from New York City! ...

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