Pain Poem by Sarah Gabriel

Pain

Rating: 5.0


I don't know what I want in life. I don't know what I want right now. All I know is that I'm hurting so much inside that it's eating me, and one day, there won't be any more of me left. Everything that ever caused a tear to trickle down my cheeks, I run away and hide from it. But now, everything is unwinding and finding its way back towards me. And I don't know what to do. I just know that the pain that I felt so long ago, is hurting ten times worse now. I am not able to run and hide anymore and there is nothing that i can do except stand here and take it. it wont be long before i cant stand anymore and i will fall. there is noone to catch me so i cannot say if i will survive. everytime i stand on my feet again life manages to pick me up and throw me through a wall, leaving me in a puddle of my own blood to not know if i will survive or not.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kayode Peter Ogunleye 23 February 2012

You really going to survive it.never seems to know the cause of the pian, but do take time to let go and forget. so touching with tender feelings. great work.

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Sylvia Lukeman 14 February 2012

A very strong well written poem It describes so well the horror and fears that can grow.when someone is not well.Writing about the way we feel can help and maybe tell a friend. If you want to look at my poems, you would be very welcome. It is good that these ideas and feelings are written down.

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Nancy M. Godfrey 10 February 2012

I see 'your strength' in your words! KEEP writing, it seems you have a lot to share with your readers and every poem you write will help you release the pain and anger, and it will also help others.

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