Paint Us Together ….. [ A Comment On Lora Colon's "The Lady In The Portrait" Poem On P H; Fantasy-Fun; No Fair Peeking This Time, Sweet Wife! ] Poem by Bri Edwards

Paint Us Together ….. [ A Comment On Lora Colon's "The Lady In The Portrait" Poem On P H; Fantasy-Fun; No Fair Peeking This Time, Sweet Wife! ]

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Paint us together my precious PH one.
Use a knife or a brush; make it be fun,
fun as you paint, and as ….I view the 'pic'.
Hell, use your finger! Or use a damn stick! !

Paint me as Adam and paint you as Eve.****
Paint us with nary a pant leg, nor ….any sleeves!
But unlike Cranach the Elder {will you believe? },
when YOU ‘paint' US, there's no need for leaves!

I'll take a photo of your artwork even before it is dry.
If I have to, I'll hide behind your curtain. Here's why:
You may be self-conscious; I KNOW you are shy.
But, to show all my PH friends, I CAN BE ‘sly Bri'.

(September 4th 2017)

Monday, September 4, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: artistic work,humorous
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
read the title and title's 'extension'.

and here is a note about the painting I refer to in my poem.

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**** (like this one) :

Adam and Eve 1533 by Cranach the Elder............WHAT IS THE LION LOOKING AT? ?

and Look out! ! i see a snake approaching!

bri ;)
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Bri Edwards

Bri Edwards

Earth, i believe
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