Paradise Lost. Poem by Sandra Feldman

Paradise Lost.

Rating: 4.8


Beware, Beware
When you don't
Do your,
Homework,
And you follow
The Snake,
Yes, you know
That One,
That organized
Paradise fake,
You'll open the doors
To disaster,
And to
Your own Country's
Wake!

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Rose Marie Juan-austin 08 June 2022

Yes, we must always open our eyes to truth and facts for the protection of ourselves and country. We must do our own part no matter how hard. A thoughtful write.

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Sandra Feldman 09 June 2022

So well understood and expressed! Gratitude, well merited and best, dear Poetess.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 08 June 2022

A powerful poem with a stern warning against those who blindly follow incompetent and corrupt leaders. Full of metaphors and images.

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Most politicians take their political activity as a career. So they have an axe to grind. It becomes the duty of every responsible citizen to "do your homework " and choose the best for his country.

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M. Asim Nehal 09 June 2022

Superb poem, I agree with the comments of Rose. Full *****

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Thank you dear friend Sandra for sharing this powerful poem. A sure 10

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Fully endorse Poetess Rose's comment that we must always open our eyes to truth and facts for the protection of ourselves and country. We must do our own part no matter how hard.'

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A warning to all those who take a wrong and a dangerous path. It is disastrous. It is important to be cautious and remain far away from a snake.

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