````part Two````the Dining Poem by wardha jawdat

````part Two````the Dining

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the dress hugs you so close,
the silk moves so rythmically
with every breath upon
your magnificent torso.
i can see the poetic pulsations
enhancing the alabaster of your neck,
i can smell the sweet sweet necter
upon your excited breath,
i have never been so acutely aware
of the piercing diamonds of your stare;
your smooth pink skin has pores
which exude pheromones
that gentle zephyrs
carry to my raw exposed needs
dormant of long ago...
when love bridged the distance
between me and your soul

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wonder why this wine is so sickly
sweet.
wonder why the air rancid and acrid
suddenly
wonder why your beauty so desirable
so keen
wonder why the words turn to mumbles
when i speak.....................
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COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Reshma Ramesh 20 October 2008

superb......................

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your smooth pink skin has pores which exude pheromones that gentle zephyrs carry to my raw exposed needs dormant of long ago... awesome just awesome Wardha Jawdat it is not the work of simple minds - exceedingly beautiful I wish these lines were mine

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Sadiqullah Khan 25 September 2008

Are you drunk or smoothly high, , , the poem in the end suddenly takes a different turn as if everything is turned upside down, , , very fine poem...in the sequence, ,10

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