Treasure Island

wardha jawdat

(multan)

***...an idyllic love....***


from the other side of sunshine
from the village behind the stars

i fancy your coming back to me
i fancy you pulsating in my heart

i fancy your eyes were sad when you turned to go
i fancy, and darling, i let those tears flow

i fancy your lips trembled as you muttered goodbye
i fancy you even kissed me and the pain flits by

i fancy i hurt you, i fancy your heart even i broke
i fancy thats why you left....not because you chose to go

i fancy the beauty of your desertion, i call it all love
i fancy it because i have nothing, if not that trust

.ah my love!
even this lonely eve
i fancy...................
from the other side of midnight
from the village behind the hills

i fancy you beckon alluringly
i fancy you loving me still........




....sometimes a broken heart needs denial to heal...

Submitted: Wednesday, September 17, 2008
Edited: Wednesday, September 17, 2008

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  • Saadat Tahir (7/1/2009 10:50:00 AM)

    i fancy you pulsating in my heart

    actually your poem pulsates with want and love.....for the beloved and is very romantic

    its a very very nice poem...beautifully written
    cheers and ten (Report) Reply

  • Akram Saqib (3/10/2009 7:59:00 AM)

    what feelings i can convey about your this great emotional poem? there is a pain and love vowen into words expressing itself.great1 (Report) Reply

  • Aijaz Asif (10/16/2008 8:54:00 AM)

    an excellent write deep composition ma'am....a thirst, wanting, needing, having then loosing....amazing 10+++

    ' kuch he kuch mein
    sub kuch chala gaya
    pheley tum chaley gaye
    phir dum chala gaya' - aijaz (Report) Reply

  • Ravinder Malhotra (10/7/2008 12:31:00 PM)

    You write well Wardha, but try keep the flow..... and should you be able to do so, your poems would be marvelous (Report) Reply

  • Wali Jamali (9/24/2008 1:29:00 PM)

    Why fancy every thing? Why not try them whether they are real are not? Poem is thoroughly enjoyable. A good reading ride. (Report) Reply

  • Kesav Easwaran (9/23/2008 8:53:00 PM)

    a cry on fancied love, in desertion though, from the village behind hills to reach the village behind the stars...melodious...good piece with excellent rhyming, Wardha...10 (Report) Reply

  • C T Heart (9/17/2008 12:38:00 AM)

    ....sometimes a broken heart needs denial to heal... great to fancy a loving piece. (Report) Reply

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