Passage Over Water Poem by Robert Duncan

Passage Over Water

Rating: 4.6


We have gone out in boats upon the sea at night,
lost, and the vast waters close traps of fear about us.
The boats are driven apart, and we are alone at last
under the incalculable sky, listless, diseased with stars.

Let the oars be idle, my love, and forget at this time
our love like a knife between us
defining the boundaries that we can never cross
nor destroy as we drift into the heart of our dream,
cutting the silence, slyly, the bitter rain in our mouths
and the dark wound closed in behind us.

Forget depth-bombs, death and promises we made,
gardens laid waste, and, over the wastelands westward,
the rooms where we had come together bombd.

But even as we leave, your love turns back. I feel
your absence like the ringing of bells silenced. And salt
over your eyes and the scales of salt between us. Now,
you pass with ease into the destructive world.
There is a dry crash of cement. The light fails,
falls into the ruins of cities upon the distant shore
and within the indestructible night I am alone.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sylvia Frances Chan 27 August 2024

TWO: The poem delves into the feelings of separation and the struggle to find connection and meaning amidst the chaos

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Sylvia Frances Chan 27 August 2024

ONE: This poem explores themes of isolation, fear, and the passage of time. The imagery of being lost at sea at night symbolizes the vast, often overwhelming nature of human emotions and experiences.

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Gajanan Mishra 03 February 2013

dark wound closed in behind us. great write,

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