Passerina Cyanea Poem by Belle Wassermeister

Passerina Cyanea

Rating: 5.0


I am a little blue bird
nice to see me, I have heard
do you want to hear my song?
it's all right to sing along
get to know my little tune
only promise not to swoon

beauty is as beauty does
unlike bees, I do not buzz
never let my beauty fade
trust the sun, don't hide in shade
I'm the queen of all the land
not that you would understand
glad to know I've got it made

Passerina Cyanea
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Passerina cyanea 17 October 2021

I wish Poem Hunter would not add line breaks where they do not belong! This poem is supposed to be just two stanzas, with six lines in the first, and seven lines in the second!

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Passerina cyanea 17 October 2021

Thank you to those who have already commented!

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Dr Dillip K Swain 14 October 2021

It's a beautiful poem. I like poets of Canada. Some modern poets of Canada are trained from Murray School of Poetry at Adelaide mentored by a delightful soul. If you don't belong to that school, please take chance to fine tune your poetry!

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Sylvia Frances Chan 15 October 2021

Lovely poem, dear Belle, this bird kind often migrates by night, using the stars to navigate.. So adventurous.5 Stars fullest!

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Rebecca Navarre 09 March 2022

Oh, What a adorably, beautiful bird tune! .. Quite beautifully painted sounds so peaceful and brings smiles too! .. Beautiful photo too! .. Definite 5 Stars! ..+++++

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Unnikrishnan E S 27 December 2021

Marvellous poem, beautiful pic.

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Cowboy Ron Williams 01 November 2021

Aha! I see what you did here, my dear friend Belle! In addition to having exactly seven syllables per line and some fun rhymes, there are THREE other elements at play here that make this poem nothing short of genius! Should I tell the other readers what they are?

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Susan Williams 01 November 2021

isn't it a glorious way to worship the Creator by enjoying his Creation! ! ! 5 stars

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Muerto Al Nacer 24 October 2021

To Dr. Dillip K. Swain: I googled Murray School of Poetry and nothing came up.

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Belle Wassermeister

Belle Wassermeister

Gleichen, Alberta, Canada
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