Pause, For Thought! Poem by lucie smith

Pause, For Thought!

Rating: 4.8


Slowing down the,
Pace of what this.
Poem should be.

Stop and think what,
These words;
Mean to me.

Don't go racing,
Off and falling,
Head over,
Heels.

You need to,
Focus on the:
Meaning and see if,
It appeals.

People have no:
Time to just stop,
And think!

No time to come,
In for a chat,
And a drink.

Take off your:
Watch and cut,
Yourself loose.

Cos your a puppet,
On a string,
Don't be put;
To bad use.

Why are you in,
A hurry to?
Get from A
To B.

Every once in a,
While it might be,
Nice to be free.

Take a walk in the country,
Go out and explore,
You've cut yourself loose,
You're a puppet no more.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dislocated Heart 11 July 2008

lovely.. i like it. nice flow to it. and a lot of meaning. thanks for sharing. :)

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