Peintre Poem by Fiona Sze-Lorrain

Peintre

Rating: 5.0


Where the bamboo clacked
in broad light, you

thought the image

out of sight. Metronome
ticked, wondering

about time. Fingers
slow, you closed

both eyes to train a cathedral

of silence without lies. Something
fluttered, you couldn't

see why. Too bare, too alike.
Was it a stupa

of colors, down

to the thred? A bell rang
twice, you realized

it was there,

slanting by your side,

the voice of summer rain, the last
Manchurian sky.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Unnikrishnan E S 26 August 2016

Hi Fiona, A really beautiful poem. Loved reading: .... .... closed both eyes to train a cathedral Of silence without lies... the voice of summer rain, the last Manchurian sky. Exquisite sequence of images creating the fantastic mood of melancholy, search, loss et al. a perfect 10++

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