'Penny' Poem by Poison 9901

'Penny'

Rating: 5.0


When our eyes first met, I knew you were mine
The moment I held you, I had crossed the line
The feeling I felt, with our first embrace
I’ll never forget, the look on your face

Silently, I watched you, as you slept that night
I knew from this moment on, everything would be alright
I had found the angel, I had been searching for
And from this night on, I would search no more

When I hold you in my arms, time simply stands still
Nothing else can compare, to the way you feel
When I kiss your lips, I grow weak in the knees
Every waking moment, with you I try to seize

When I’m away from you, and your not there
All I can think about, is your eyes, your lips, and your long blonde hair
I can’t wait for the moment to hold you once again,
For you are my wife, my lover, and my very best friend

I will love you forever, till my dieing days
For every moment spent with you, leaves me in a haze
For my last dieing breath, I would gladly give to you
So that others may know you, and love you, as I do

Dedicated to my beautiful wife
Whom I love with all my heart and soul
Penny

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Frank James Ryan Jr...fjr 23 September 2007

Very nicely done, P-9901...lots of heartwarm detail...and vivid imagery... Amorous Poetry is not as easy as many think...as it is easy to jot down some smooth words of love, but if the words don't create a well constructed nexus of verses...it won't come-off as this poem does... FjcR

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