Perfect Poem by Sen unknown

Perfect



smiles
laughter
was all we had.
you leaned on me while i leaned on you.
we laughed.
we smiled.

our feet hurt from all the walking.
our throats are sore from all the shouting.

the parade pulled us together
now im more happy than ever!

i hope we can be together.
cause i really like you.
and it seems to me you like me too.
all i want to do is kiss you!

the smiles
the laughter
the everything was perfect.

just perfect.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Devin Mckeever 08 December 2007

Thank you for the comment you made about the poem 'Loneliness' I really appreciated it! Anyways, I enjoyed reading this poem! Well done

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