Perfect World Poem by Ellen frawley

Perfect World

Rating: 5.0


If the world was made of candy floss, lollipops and lemon drops,
Little girls were made of sugar, spice and everything nice,
If Santa came everyday,
The sun only shone it never rained,
If money really grew on tree,
If everyone was perfect,
Every thing was sugar coated,
If every child was born silver spoon in mouth,
If pain and suffering were no more.

Then what joy would be left in life,
Nothing to work for,
You’ll have no hopes,
No wishes, desires,
You’ll have no dreams,
There would be nothing left to do or see,
There would be no wonder left in life
If all the answers to life questions were answered,
With nothing to life for we would all just die

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Romeo Della Valle 28 July 2012

Beautiful and Sweet! A well crafted and poignant write embedded with a smooth flow! Beauty and Talent magically blended in this touching write! 10+++ Thank you for sharing and keep it up! God Bless You! Love and Peace for always! Romeo from New York City!

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