Perfection Poem by Eyan Desir
Perfection
Burning passion to succeed
Pushes one face to face
With the flower without flaws
There is no escape
Determination burns
Harder and harder one push
To grasp its golden palm
Continuously many fall
Short of pinching its beauty
Its beauty has always
Sat upon God's hand....
And close to mortal man.
nicely done...no one is perfect, u r right...this piece is nice..
God, flower and its perfection...nice concept...good write...10
This is a wonderful piece of work well done 10+ love and light nathan cx
A finely penned poem, . Captured delightfully! Thank you for sharing!
This lines came into my mind after reading your poem...“The thing that is really hard, and really amazing, is giving up on being perfect and beginning the work of becoming yourself.”
well written and has reality written in every phrase. great job and don't ever stop writing. youre amazing :)
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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The poem is written against my life experiences In work, sport, love and etc.. I have never been perfect... Others on this site have told me they have reach this level...... the poem don't pertain to them...