Petals Of Flower Poem by ramesh rai

Petals Of Flower



Petals of flower are very lucid
feeling its softness and tenderness
guarding nectar of flower.

Petals of flower is transmitting fragrance
protecting its heart from sun, rain and thunder
dews of chilling winter can't pierce and
touch the heart of flower; so
Petals are her soulmate.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Lalitha iyer 07 July 2015

Grammar mistakes have to be taken care of and expression wise you could add more beauty and poetic nicety by saying for eg. soulmate are her petals rather than petals are her soulmate...........

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Beautiful like a flower. A nice read.

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Tirupathi Chandrupatla 06 July 2015

Beautiful description of petals of a flower. They protect the flower's soul.

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