Treasure Island

I AM THAT MOUSE

(Detroit, MI)

Peter's Promise


i should have
heeded your warning

then i wouldn't
be in mourning

i should have
listened to reason

instead i went
and committed treason

i used the highs
to deny the lows

and i unknowingly
ignored the crows

losing ground and
losing weightt

i now cannot
deny my fate

i must pay
for the things i've done

hung upside,
with no where to run

Submitted: Monday, June 19, 2006
Edited: Saturday, August 07, 2010
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