Ph: Life: Damaged But Still Salvageable! Poem by Brian Johnston

Ph: Life: Damaged But Still Salvageable!

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So just what does one do with oneself
When your life knocks you down more than once?
Do you just plant your ‘tush' on a shelf,
Or frame your act and pass as a dunce.

You hurt less when people laugh with you?
Are you happy when no one's in sight?
More comfortable at a big do
With no one cognizant of your plight?

Do you quail when tides aren't your ally?
Do you run to your bedroom and hide?
Is courage always in short supply
When your fears bubble up deep inside?

What qualities do you want in friends?
Is this what you offer to others?
Weaknesses not requiring amends
Good enough for sisters and brothers?

Damaged folk may still hope for the best
But settle for just what is offered
They think that they failed some crucial test
And act like their virtue's un-coffered.

What hurts you more, your wife was a whore
Or she carries on now with no end.
Called upon, can she manage the store,
Has she skills on which you depend?

Take heart my friend, we're all damaged goods
There's no need for pretense at our age
Put out to pasture must nots and shoulds
Just enjoy our brief time on the stage.

Thursday, May 1, 2014
Topic(s) of this poem: Life
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Brian Johnston
April 30,2014
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Yash Shinde 02 May 2014

No words for this one Brian! ............ Now you are doing what exactly I wanted you to do, this poem is filled with passion and hope.... And this time my friend you've felt it with heart. The title is really, really catchy and captivating...... The things you've described happens often with us, yet the last stanza instills courage and motivation! ......... You've really come to my expectations........ I loved this heartily, though I found some example irrelevant.............. This one has influenced me greatly, and sounds like a tale of a failed Indian student. People could really relate with thine write (which was fairly difficult for them to do before) , This will be loved heartily by Indian students, and worthy enough to be hung in learner's room.................... This undoubtedly goes my favorite poems list!

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Theodora Onken 01 May 2014

Loved this one, Brian!

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