Pinkish Heart Poem by Still Mee

Pinkish Heart

Rating: 5.0


when i see the moon tonight
i shall tell him
of the love i have for you

and when the stars appear tonight
they too shall know
how great a love
i hold for you

only them will know
that it is only you
who made this heart unblue

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mohammad Akmal Nazir 26 June 2011

Concise yet beautiful great poem. It was written well with nice texture and imagery. I rated it 10. Thanks for sharing..... Kindly read and rate my poem 'A humble complaint' on page 2. Best regards Akmal

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