(Very, Very short poem?) : D
Please Don’t Give Up On Me!
You came right out and said it.
“I Love you damnit! ”
You started crying,
As I lie here dying.
I can barely see,
As I draw my last breath,
You said, “Please Don’t Give Up On Me! ! ”
~Leslie
short but sweet! ! loved it 10+ again hope u hve time to read my poems too...
i say it a lot but its true, short and sweet does it sometimes. and you 4sure did it in this one. another great piece.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
sweet and sad all at once great job