Poems Poem by Ariel Rousseau

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Poems are hard
Yep...yep...
I don't know where to start.
Many things in my head,
But nothing that sparks the fire
Or rises from the dead
Of my mind.
The blank emptiness
That covers my thoughts.
How to overcome this?
So many have.
So why can't I?
Why not?

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Aylissa Ramirez 29 April 2009

i like this one especially the part where is says 'rises from the dead of my mind'

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Adeline Foster 27 April 2009

Ah ha, jump in with both feet, atta girl. You have the right idea. But for real, how to do it. Read others poems and it will come to you. Hint: read good poems and good poem will come to you. No harm in trying to compete with the masters. Adeline

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Ashleigh Michaud 21 April 2009

that was cute! ! i loved ur name first, haha jk. anyhoo, u rock! ! nice and short and has its own style. ]k loves :)

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Ariel Rousseau

Ariel Rousseau

Twin Falls, Idaho
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