Poetic Problem Poem by Fred Babbin

Poetic Problem

Rating: 5.0


I hear the words
Inside my head –
They whisper to me
When I am lucky.
But when they’re silent
The screaming begins
The great black pit opens
And the feeling of death
Comes too soon,
So I must hope to survive
Until the next poem is written

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Patti Masterman 28 September 2009

Sounds like a nightmare I used to have, truly. Glad to meet you here, Fred. I want to read many more of your poems.

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