Is it a rhythem or is it a rhyme?
Or is it a feeling inside, who knows?
Your pen hits the paper and BOOM
Your thought begin yo merege in
The paper turns your thoughts in to
FEELINGS, ACTIONS, DREAMS,
So what is poetry its different for every one?
This is too good(except few spelling mistakes) . The paper, pen, the mind, the heart and the thoughts; an insperable relation between them for a poet. Wonderful.
very true it is different for every one...not every poem should be judged with the same parameters...a lovely poem on poem
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
this is so nice piece not only a piece but tells what poetry is in some side the hard wall is describing.. nice piece rebecca luwi