Poetry Bomb Poem by Liza Sud

Poetry Bomb

Rating: 5.0


I wrote to you 20 poems,
But didn’t send them to you,
Because you will make a bomb of them,
It will make me mad and I'll swoon.

I fear your exaltation,
Putting my energy down.
You’ve read books on revelations,
But seems your own – didn't have.

Friday, November 6, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: poetry
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Jayatissa K. Liyanage 06 November 2015

Is it a fear that your bomb, if explodes would reveal something? I wonder. Let it be Liza. That is what poetry is all about, and you've already blasted it. But, its only caressing hearts and minds. Nicely plotted! X

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Sanjukta Nag 06 November 2015

Poetical Bomb - well your words are also bomb indeed, exploding inside the minds of readers.

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