Poetry: What Is And Not Poem by Aniruddha Pathak

Poetry: What Is And Not

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Not when thoughts into poetic lines freeze,
Nor when prose decorated is like frieze;
Not when words painted are, and feelings pose,
When winter has warm wish to be spring's rose;
Nor when some beautiful images
Get captured in decorated cages;
When heaving hearts hanker to rule,
Heads hammer out young lessons learnt at school;
Nor as you see in this little poem,
When heroic couplets as if from deserts stem;
When lines are tinkered with ready tools,
And heavily loaded, look like mules;
Nor when old heart a mistress may desire,
Spent passion when burn in conjugal fire;
A poet that puns aimless runs,
In nunnery as if are nuns;
And alliteration's fine in limit,
It is like too much light needlessly lit;
Poems, not all but make-believe,
Poetry is no far from how we live;
Avoid schools where fresh wings are hated,
And minds are drained like fields harvested;
If you close eyes from what may surround,
And still can see for miles around,
Or with plugged ears still can hear all clear,
You are the bird that sings; you are the seer.
Thin line divides what is and not,
No art is it in school is taught.
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Musings | 10.07.11 |

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Bharati Nayak 16 October 2018

Poetry can not be forced.Beautiful words or images only can not make poetry.It lies in the heart and roams in our sphere of imagination before coming to ife.

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Bharati Nayak 16 October 2018

Poetry is no far from how we live; Avoid schools where fresh wings are hated, And minds are drained like fields harvested; If you close eyes from what may surround, And still can see for miles around, Or with plugged ears still can hear all clear, You are the bird that sings; you are the seer- - - - - - -Thank you for sharing this wonderful poem.

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Aniruddha Pathak 17 October 2018

Thank you Bharati Nayak

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