Prayer Poem by Sanika kkk

Prayer

Rating: 4.5


The childhood’s innocence ended,
When with him, you blended.
Now it remains a far away memory,
Of imitating your mother in a red sari.

Now in your womb,
You bear a sweet fruit.
The seed is strong, they said
But, oh! So are you?

Your in-laws they masqueraded,
With vows and promises so saint,
But at night they cracked the whip,
Which scarred your back and bloodied your shrieks.

Stroking your salvation you wondered,
Of your late girl child who did no blunder.
It makes you pray for this one to escape,
Before they take her and the hope they break.

Hopeless wife and helpless mother,
Alone and useless as a broken feather,
No one to sympathize in this far city
Strong for too long, burned with self pity.

Yet you make your choice,
To stay alive for that voice,
Which is listening to your thoughts,
From that void and growing strong.

Wednesday, October 14, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: choice,misery,mother and child
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Pranayee Gupta Rachamalla 29 January 2016

dear friend its really good poem the way you expressed each and every feeling elevated your poem! keep writing and sharing dear! all the emotions are clearly and beautifully expressed! nice job sanika!

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Sanika Khairnar 30 January 2016

thanks a lot for commenting pranayee! !

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Chinedu Dike 16 November 2015

The intricacies, care, pain... of motherhood are well depicted in the poem. A well articulated piece of poetry insightfully penned with conviction. A lovely poem indeed. Thanks for sharing Sanika. Please read my poem MANDELA - THE IMMORTAL ICON.

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Sanika Khairnar 19 November 2015

Thank you so much for commenting. it is really a motivation for young poets like me.

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Pamela Sinicrope 14 October 2015

Wow! This is a powerful poem about women. So sad and tragic, yet hopeful. You've conveyed the plight of women very effectively. Thanks for sharing.

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Sanika Khairnar 16 October 2015

Thank you so much for viewing and commenting. it means a lot.

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