Kaitlyn Bell

Rookie (8/13/95 / Fenton)

Prayer - Poem by Kaitlyn Bell

She hides herself behind a wall
Somewhere she can not fall
The floor goes out
She falls down but no one knows
How she feels on the inside and not the out
She stops thinking shes gone out
But something is wrong
She feels the warmth
And feels a breeze
She looks up she is on her knees
Her head was bowed
Her eyes have been closed
Her hands cupped
And damp with water
Shes filled with tears of happiness


Comments about Prayer by Kaitlyn Bell

  • Gold Star - 29,434 Points Gangadharan Nair Pulingat (5/26/2014 1:45:00 AM)

    Nice poem and surprising endings. (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie Blue angel Florida (7/29/2007 11:16:00 PM)

    What a surprizing ending, really emotional, thank you! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Jemarie Ragudo (7/12/2007 10:11:00 PM)

    I like poems like yours that addresses the spiritual realm. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Thursday, July 12, 2007

Poem Edited: Sunday, March 20, 2011


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